Comments on a song I wrote

[2_of_8]

Ok, so here's a song that I wrote for an upcoming school concert. Right now, it's being synthesized by a small sound base - just a small step above midi quality... excuse me for that Just give me some comments on it, etc. It'd be especially nice if they were of a musical nature, for those of you with talents in music
Thanks!

Clickeh. 4 MB, 128 kbs mp3.

And BTW, the melody part is supposed to be for vocals; right now, it's just an instrument, soon to be replaced by voice.

[SwiftSpear]

Wow...  Coherant music  :blink:

You hack at everything.

The style I write in is totally different, and I have pretty much no experiance in the style of this song, so all I can really say is it sounds good, and reminds me of FF6 or some anime or something.

[duherman]

Reminds me of those midis....

[2_of_8]

Reminds me of those midis....

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I used a 5-MB soundbase for the program; don't expect quality in these sounds It's made to be performed live anyway.

[CorvusX]

You hack at everything.

[snapback]46269[/snapback]

Bant him.

Nice work, 1/4 :cool:

[Manta]

The title is misleading. I thought I would finally hear him without whisper syndrome  

[SlickWill]

I think if you listen to his music, you feel the whisper syndrome speaking.   :p   I actually really liked it.  It is really good.  The best thing though it's not really repetative.  Reminded me of Yanni.  Which is not a bad thing, he writes some crazy bad ass stuff.