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April 14, 2005, 11:03:50 PM
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Ok, so here's a song that I wrote for an upcoming school concert. Right now, it's being synthesized by a small sound base - just a small step above midi quality... excuse me for that :) Just give me some comments on it, etc. It'd be especially nice if they were of a musical nature, for those of you with talents in music :)
Thanks!

Clickeh. 4 MB, 128 kbs mp3.

And BTW, the melody part is supposed to be for vocals; right now, it's just an instrument, soon to be replaced by voice.
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April 15, 2005, 03:47:29 PM
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Wow...  Coherant music  :blink:

You hack at everything.

The style I write in is totally different, and I have pretty much no experiance in the style of this song, so all I can really say is it sounds good, and reminds me of FF6 or some anime or something.
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April 15, 2005, 11:26:36 PM
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Reminds me of those midis....
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April 16, 2005, 08:22:08 AM
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Reminds me of those midis....
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I used a 5-MB soundbase for the program; don't expect quality in these sounds :) It's made to be performed live anyway.
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April 16, 2005, 08:45:40 AM
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You hack at everything.
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Bant him.

Nice work, 1/4 :cool:

April 16, 2005, 02:30:29 PM
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The title is misleading. I thought I would finally hear him without whisper syndrome  :(


April 17, 2005, 04:31:52 AM
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I think if you listen to his music, you feel the whisper syndrome speaking.   :p   I actually really liked it.  It is really good.  The best thing though it's not really repetative.  Reminded me of Yanni.  Which is not a bad thing, he writes some crazy bad ass stuff.