Poems

[.NmF. Screen]

These are a few poems that I have composed over the years.  I would like some comments to see what you guys think about them.


A Murmur in the Wind.

A rustle through the leaves.
A rippling of the pond.
There is something in the air,
something far, but near.
Ever close.  Ever distant.
A yearning for something,
somewhere, someone.
Nothing can compare.
No one would dare.
To think the suffering
Being seperate,
but yet a pair.
The thought is there
though the body isn't.
I love you
Tis the murmur in the wind.

             
A Raindrop

There it goes.
A small bead of water,
Drops from the sky,
Down it plummets,
Taking shape as it falls.
Could it be a tear?
The sky is crying.
You can feel its sorrow,
As the sky pounds the earth.
Thunder and lightening,
Shake the ground.
Why can't they understand,
The sky is crying.

     
Sleepy Rain

Sleepy rain,
Falling on my head.
Nothing seems to change
Nothing but the bed.
I roll and toss,
Thinking about my loss.
What did I do?
How did I loose?
I cannot tell.
It’s completely gone.
No trace of existence.
It might be for the best though.
Just like an arrow shot from a bow.
Oh where, oh where did my sleep go?

   
That's all for now!  Peace.

[Grimm]

I like them, similarly calm but still with their own style.  

[.NmF. Screen]

I like them, similarly calm but still with their own style. 

yea, I thought it was nice that way

[TheChuckster]

Where's the obligatory NS poem?    Any how, really good. A lot better than I can write.